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Personal Narrative Narrative Writing
EmbEddEd AssEssmENt
Scoring Criteria
4
3
2
1
How English Works
The narrative
• uses vivid verbs
consistently to help the reader visualize details
• uses first- and third-person pronouns correctly and effectively.
The narrative
• uses vivid verbs
that help the reader
visualize details
• uses first- and third-
person pronouns correctly.
The narrative
• uses weak vivid
verbs and/or uses
them inconsistently
• uses some
pronouns correctly.
The narrative
• lacks the use of
vivid verbs to help the reader visualize details
• uses first- and/ or third-person pronouns incorrectly.
Interact in Meaningful Ways
The narrative
• uses a variety of
strong figurative language such as similes and metaphors to produce different effects on the reader
• develops both internal and external conflicts that advance the plot.
The narrative
• uses some
figurative language such as similes and metaphors to produce different effects on the reader
• develops a conflict that advances the plot.
The narrative
• uses ineffective
or weak figurative
language
• develops a weak
conflict that does not advance the plot.
The narrative
• lacks figurative
language
• lacks any conflicts.
Unit 1 • Stories of Change • Part 3: Embedded Assessment 45
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