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Revising by Creating Complex Sentences
8. Revise the paragraph below by combining sentences to create complex sentences. Use a dependent marker to connect the dependent and independent clauses.
We should go to the movies on Saturday. The weather will be lousy. The test we had today was tough. A movie will be a good way to unwind. The new Hunger Games installment is out. I know you’re a big fan of the books. This will convince you to see all the films in the series, too. I may be able get my brother to drive us. He wants to see it anyway.
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Check Your Understanding
Explain three ways you can revise your writing to improve its coherence.
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